Another great blog! I would suggest to add Dr. Haifaa Jawad as reference and slo Kimberle Crenshaw and her theory of intersectionality to further support your writing 🙂

This is a well written post, I would add Harvard referencing and touch Kimberle Cremshaw’s theory of intersectionality to make it even more robust.

this blog post was a pleasure to read! I like that you added the texts you used as links but would like to recommend adding them at the bottom as Harvard references as this is one of the things we get marked on. I would also touch on Intersectionlity (Crenshaw) as you mention it here but this would back your point up.

Another great read with varied references.

I agree with Fraces; Hence the need for more radical policy changes based on more deconstruction of terms such as representation, inclusion, diversity, equity.”

500 words is not enough to establish how we can move forward and enact change but reflecting on the structure we operate…Read more

I really enjoyed reading this blog post. Thank you for mentioning UAL’s
current response of UAL to its trans and non-binary inclusive policies.

I though this piece was writing was well rounded and with a wide range of references. I don’t have any suggestions or recommendations, apart from that I can’t see Nash in the references 🙂

I enjoy how you bring so much of your own experience into the topic, this shows reflective practice, have you considered embedding some text on reflection into your references and text? I think this will make your writing more robust.

Also, you can embed links into your blog post, I wonder…Read more

I enjoyed reading your blog post, I particulalrly enjoyed the diverse use of sources to get your point across.

As someone who also uses a lot of quotes when writting myslef, I would make the suggestion to consider shortening the quotes and or explaining the concept and only addidng a short exerpt of the quote, this may also…Read more

This is a thought provoking piece of writting and a really enjoyable read. I like how have intertwined your personal experiences wuth the sources referenced to make your point clear.

I have been reading this book, also available online that you find interesting to have a look at and add to your references.…Read more

You have reflected on the questions I asked, added a diverse and well rounded list of references to support your intervention, I am looking forward to seeing the outcome.

Have you considered adding a couple of these examples to your blog post? Just a couple of lines, mentioning the welcome slide, recorded lectures with caption, UAL guidance etc.

There’s…Read more

What an exceptional piece of writting!
You have such a clear grasp of the field you work in and your confidence and knowlwedge on the subject really comes across on your blog. Im not sure if I know what else to add or suggest…perhaps its worth expanding on the social model of disability or adding alink to futher information for…Read more

Another fantastic piece of writting!

I will certanly read some of the texts you referenced as well. The way you wrote regarding intersectionality, faith, self and the discomfort caused in openly revealing this part of the self really resonated with me.

Neumann’s idea of ‘faith as a critical pedagogy’ (2011) is a good way of…Read more

They are so well structured, clear and draw from vairiety of sources. I am in awe of how you can sum up the content of a text with using quotations and get your point across so clearly.

The quote below sums up, what should be happening in our practice and in HE, I couldn’t agree with you…Read more